The topic sentence is missing from this paragraph. Write a topic sentence that clearly states the main idea. "The sport of steeplechase originated in Great Britain during the 1800s. People would run from town to town, using the tall steeples on churches as markers. Participants raced across long fields, jumped over stone walls between properties, and ran through creeks and streams without stopping. Modern steeplechase races take place on tracks with hurdles and water pits."

the whisper is the answer, hope this : )

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hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

the dog listens to mr miller