In "To My Old Master," which quote from the text best states a claim
Jourdon makes about the value of
his past service to the Colonel?
"This will make us forget
and forgive old scores
and rely on your justice
and friendship in the
future."
"I want to know
particularly what the good
chance is you propose to
give me. I am doing
tolerably well here. I get
$25 a month, with
victuals and clothing"
"...we have concluded to
test your sincerity by
asking you to send us our
wages for the time we
served you."
"At $25 a month for me,
and $2 a week for Mandy,
our earnings would
amount to $11,680. Add
to this the interest for the
time our wages have
been kept back"

"I want to know

particularly what the good

chance is you propose to

give me. I am doing

tolerably well here. I get

$25 a month, with

victuals and clothing"

"...we have concluded to

test your sincerity by

asking you to send us our

wages for the time we

served you."

"At $25 a month for me,

and $2 a week for Mandy,

our earnings would

amount to $11,680. Add

to this the interest for the

time our wages have

been kept back"

Explanation:

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.