Read the sentence.

i am planning a trip to london with my uncle, shazia and nanette.

which revision is necessary?

a. add a comma after “trip”
b. add a comma after “london”
c. add a comma after “shazia”
d. add a comma after “and”

The answer is:

b. add a comma after “London”

A comma is used to separte apposites, in this case an apposite is "With my uncle, Shazia and Nanette." an apposite gives more information to the main clause of the sentence, in this case if you remove with whom who he is planning the trip, you still get the main Idea that he is planning a trip to London.

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we need to see the paragraphs in order to answer this.