How can you make this sentence stronger and more descriptive? What's another way you can say that his "heart was dull" or "empty"? how can you make this sentence sound better? "Each time the girl passed by that boy, his heart seemed to grow more duller and more dull emptier."

Each time she passed by, he faded until it was as if he wasn't living at all- a skeleton with an aching heart.

or

Each time she passed by, his desolate place of a heart grew emptier and emptier until he sunk into the sinkhole he created for himself.

Explanation:

I'm not so good with words I tried

Hope this helps!

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2. passive

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