Pleasee Help so I need a conclusion for my romance-ish short story and this is what I have right now. my teacher says I could make it "longer and be more descriptive"
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make it better :c

pls help. its appreciated
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The boy would not accept it. “No way,” he said. “I can't take all this love. This is too much for me. I won’t be able to contain it all by myself. ” the boy said with a grin. A grin that was larger and more stunning than the girl had ever before seen in her lifetime.
Oh. . . all right then. I guess we’ll just share” the girl said “Furthermore, our love,” the girl says with a grin just as big and beautiful as his,
“will be greater and stronger than any love consolidated”

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explanation:

in ray bradbury's short story "a sound of thunder", mr. eckels's fearfulness leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.

in the story, mr. eckels, who is a hunter, hires a time travel company to travel to the age of dinosaurs. although he is excited for the hunting expedition at the beginning, when they reach there and mr. eckels sees the tyrannosaurus, he feels frightened. as he is afraid of the tyrannosaurus, he steps off the path although he has been warned not to do it. by stepping off the path, the entire course of the future is affected: mr. eckart alters the future by stepping on a butterfly, which causes a new man to be elected president in the future. in that way, it is mr. eckart's fearfulness what triggers 'the butterfly effect' and what leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.