Who thinks of this and I'm still working on this In the meeting with the Gods and Valkyries, Zeus and Sigrun are trying to make a peace treaty between the Gods and Valkyries. They have been in a war few 5 years, a cyber demi-god name ThinkHeat WarFire, was a top fighter and the first cyber demi-god that was born, enters the room.

“How long is this gonna take” says ThinkHeat as he taps his foot to the ground.

“patient, WarFire,” says Zeus.

“ok,” says ThinkHeat. As he walks out of the room, he bumps into a valkyrie.

“Hey, watch where you go...ing…” says ThinkHeat. He sees a young valkyrie and he got a warm feeling. Her name is Kara, she is the next valkyrie queen and she wants to be a fighter, but Sigrun told her to learn how to be a queen.

“S-sorry s-sir, I-I’ll w-watch w-where I-I’m g-go...ing…” says Kara. She sees him with a warm feeling. They look at each other for a few second and ThinkHeat help her up.

“S-sorry for getting mad at you,” says ThinkHeat.

“I-it’s ok,” says Kara, she picks up her books and note, ThinkHeat helps her to pick up her books and notes and then their hands touches on the last book, they blush and looks away, Kara picks up her book and ThinkHeat gives her books and notes back.

“T-thanks,” says Kara.

“Y-you’re welcome, do you need help?” says ThinkHeat.

“Uhhh… y-yeah,” says Kara, as they walked down the hallway, they got to the study room and they put the books and the notes on the table.

“T-thanks again,” says Kara.

“N-no problem,” says ThinkHeat.

“What it is like?” says Kara.

“Huh?” says ThinkHeat.

“To be a fighter,” says Kara.

“Oh, it can be easy and hard, but it’s worth it in the end,” says ThinkHeat.

“O-oh,” says Kara, they’re confused that Gods and Valkyries hate each other, but why do they have a warm feeling about each other, and then they hear Zeus and Sigrun yelling at each other.

“YOU CAN’T DO THAT,” yells Zeus.

“THEN YOU CAN’T HAVE YOUR GODS FRIENDS IN OUR REALMS,” yells Sigrun.

So I don't know the entire story and everything but I think this is amazing! I'm a writer myself and I think you give readers an understanding of what the characters are saying, doing, and feeling. I just think that Kara is stuttering a lot. Again I don't know the entire story but the part where Kara says, "S-sorry s-sir, I-I'll w-watch w-where I-I'm g-go...ing..."... Every single word Kara says is stuttered and a bit delayed. I would strongly advise you to take out some of the stuttering, but not all. For example, "S-sorry sir. I-I'll w-watch where I'm g-going..." Something like that is what you should do. Also the part where Kara says "What it is like?" should be "What is it like?" Also Kara stops her stuttering there. I think before she speaks, put a bit about how Kara feels. Something like she didn't like where the conversation was going or she wanted to muster all of her courage and actually speak with ThinkHeat about being a fighter. I also think you should add a bit of what the characters feel. Once again, I don't know the entire story but I think you should use my advise. You don't have to though. Other than that, I think this piece or excerpt of the story is really good. You're a really good writer!

the answer is b. an opposing veiwpoint

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the play romeo and juliet was one of the most famous love tragedies ever written. this love story unfortunately had a fatal ending. many people argue over why the lovers had died, was it over free will or fate?  

the death of romeo and juliet was partially because of free will. the fact that romeo and juliet got married knowing that there was a bitter feud between their families, the montague and capulet’s. this feud brought on many problems, such as the murder of tybalt by romeo. juliet knew that this might be a problem for her and romeo. juliet had said: “what’s in a name”? which explains her ill fate of being a capulet and romeo being a montague. when romeo tells his servant “ ay, mine own…show more content…

i believe they had died over the love they had for each other, strong enough that their lives could end so suddenly if something horrible had come between them, and that was exactly how it happened. this tragedy occurred within five days of the two meeting, they experienced love at first sight, got married and quickly were dead. free will became a part of this when juliet decided to take friar laurence’s advise in inhaling a potion that will make people assume she is died but will awake in 42 hours prier to when she took it. when romeo had heard the news that juliet was dead, he assumed it was true, and responded with the line; “well juliet, i will lay with thee tonight”. to me this line indicated how he feels for juliet by dying in her will. the fact that free will didn’t take control of the story; it left fate to be the murder of the lovers. fate first kicked in when their eyes met at the capulet party. when romeo and juliet spoke, their words had powerful contentment; they had such a strong feeling for one another that they could lay in each other’s arms forever. their happiness didn’t last long; there were many reasons for this, for example; the marriage lord capulet arranged between paris and juliet. i believe that the plot of the play thus far leads the audience to believe that the deaths were a result of fate. the last act will determine once and for all if it is fate or free will. romeo again challenges fate.

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