Alice is writing a review for the recent production of Shakespeare's As You Like It at her college. Alice is known for her humorous and satirical tone in her reviews. Read the introduction paragraph. William Shakespeare's comedy As You Like It was recently performed here at our college by a group of student actors and actresses. While the plot is intended to be a comedy, the audience was laughing for all the wrong reasons. Missed lines, costume malfunctions, and props falling apart had the audience incredibly amused. This slapstick rendition of a Shakespearean comedy gets slapped with a "dislike" from this reviewer.
Which revision will best help Alice achieve a humorous tone?
Remove the following statement:
This slapstick rendition of a Shakespearean comedy gets slapped with a "dislike" from this reviewer.
Revise the first sentence--"William Shakespeare's comedy
As You Like It was recently performed here at our college by a group of student actors and actresses."--to have more compelling opening.
Give more background on the play.

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this is what i put and it was correct

it's a way for authors to communicate with reader in this time period. books from the past can teach us about life.

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