Directions: Follow the directions under each section of the workshop. Make sure your work is clear and legible, and contains proper capitalization, grammar, spelling, and punctuation where applicable.
Section Vill: Revising Errors
Revise the following passage to correct two fragments, one run-on sentence, one dangling modifier, and
one misplaced modifier
"Simone Biles"
Simone Biles is an American gymnast from Texas. She and her siblings grew up in foster care they were
eventually adopted. At six years old, a field trip to a gym inspired her to train as a gymnast. She entered
many competitions and improved her skills. At the 2013 American Cup, she competed in place of an
injured teammates unfortunately, Simone fell off the beam during competition and placed second. Her
2014 season did not start on time with an injured shoulder. Luckily, she her injury. Through hard work and
determination, she became the first woman to hold three consecutive all-around titles in the World
Gymnastics Championships. When she entered the 2016 Olympics, already the reigning national champion,
Biles ended up winning four gold medals.

do you have a picture at least? because other than that I can't help, sorry.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)