Hello, can someone check out my FictionPress story and tell me what u think (remove spaces. Replace DOT with actual ".") fictionpress [DOT] com / s / 3353431

click on your photo icon on top right and click edit profile you should be able to change it from there

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."