Go to the Notebook tool () and review the thesis statement you wrote. Then locate and list at least two sources that support your thesis statement. Make sure that your sources are credible and meet the standards discussed in this lesson.

Before revision:

Did you know that there are more cell phones in the world then there are toilets. As of 2014, there was about 7 billion people on Earth. And there were 6.8 billion cell phone subscriptions. each subscription could have several cell phones under it. Cell phones have made it easier to contact people who live on the ooposite side of the globe, emailing family on the other side of the country, text friends across the room, and using social media to blog about life. These days, many people have canceled their home phones. They depend completely on there cell phones many of them dont know anything about how it was invented or who helped create it. Looking at its history, development, and uses, the cell phone has greatly changed many areas of human life by shaping how we communicate.

After revision:

Did you know that there are more cell phones in the world than there are toilets. As of 2014, there was about 7 billion people on Earth. And there were 6.8 billion cell phone subscriptions, with several cell phones connected to each subscription. Cell phones have made it easier to do the following things: contact people who live on the ooposite side of the globe email family on the other side of the country, text friends across the room, and use social media to share news. In fact, many people have canceled their home phones. They depend completely on there cell phones for communication. Yet most of them dont know anything about how the cell phone was invented. Looking at its history, development, and uses, the cell phone has greatly changed many areas of human life by shaping how we communicate.

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explanation:

are you kidding? from that description of two mansions, you can't figure out which one is bleak and desolate? maybe you should consider looking those words up in a dictionary, if you don't know what they mean already.