URGENT CALLING ALL A P E X USERS Summarize the passage below in at least two or three sentences. Then evaluate the passage, focusing on the quality of the details included. Which portions of the passage do not provide enough detail to help the reader understand the topic? Why? After you have evaluated the passage, revise it to improve the quality of its details. In your revision, show which parts of the original paragraph you are using by underlining them. Note: You may need to make up information to add to the paragraph. (15 points)

"Consumer Risk: Buddy Blocks"
A new product on the market, Buddy Blocks, poses serious risks to children. The blocks can break easily and hurt children. Some children have even had to be hospitalized. The paint used on the blocks is also unsafe. It has caused illness in several young children. There is one age group of children who should especially avoid playing with these blocks. The national consumer product panel is considering removing this toy from the market because of the problems it has caused.