(HELP)How can this sentence be revised to formal style? [Stimulus]
If people are unable to look away from their smart phones and
communicate with the world around them, then it will be in the end of
civilization, as we know it.

people are unable to look away from there phones and communicate with the world and other people around them but it will not be the end of it

question: why should you take some time to reflect on the interview after it's over?

answer: to review what went well and learn how to do it better next time

explanation: you do this so incase you did bad on this interview you can reflect back on it and fix the mistakes you missed and when you do another interview you will do great because you reflected and studied what you did wrong

question answered by

(jacemorris)

in my opinion i think it was not excessive at all. the maids turned against the queen in his absence, how could he ever trust them again? if he let them go they would surely spread the news of the suitor's deaths, which is much too risky. as for the suitors, they were selfish, rude, and greedy. the god's had apparently marked them for death, meaning odysseus made their death come faster.