Can someone proof read this descriptive paragraph for me PLEASEE

Explanation:

proof read? btw love it it was beutifull

I like it a lot but I think you should not put dust into many times like where you said it blew in him mouth and nose. Leave that but get rid of the very next sentence or if you don fix it so that it makes sense.

Just trying to help. :)

Explanation:

he wants to suppress a potential uprising of the animals.

he wants to distract the animals from learning the truth.

he wants to prove to the other animals that he is

powerful

explanation:

i dont care if you mark brainliest cause im not desperate

the sample answer on e2020

conflicting values are demonstrated between two different groups in animal farm. first, the farm animals value hard work. this is shown by them working late and working long hours at the request of the pigs. napoleon and the pigs, however, sleep late daily. furthermore, the animals value equality. this differs from the value of napoleon and the other pigs. instead of equality, they value only gaining power and maintaining their own privilege, which is demonstrated by their taking extra milk and sleeping in beds.