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English, 08.01.2021 23:30 rafi10

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There can be anyone that can attack you while you are down, or just attack you when you least expect it. Who knows, maybe one of your own friends is like that themselves. People could do that to make money, friends, or they just do not like you. You probably know someone like that. Many people are like that, you can go to the store and there would probably meet someone like that.

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