How do I rewrite this: There is a long hallway. Ben walks down it. He sees a series of doors. None of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one. It just leads to an empty room. He hears a noise. He looks over his shoulder. Nobody is there.

Hi there~

Ben walks down a long hallway. He sees a series of doors, but none of the doors has a sign on it. He doesn't know which door to choose. He tries the first one, but it's just an empty room. He hears a noise behind him so he looks over his shoulder only to see no one there.  

Hope this helps

Sky

your multimedia presentation should meet the following specifications: • it should be a minimum of four written paragraphs in length, which includes an introduction that previews the topic, incorporates facts, definitions, quotations, or other important information. • it should address all of the questions assigned in the webquest. • it should use vocabulary specific to the topic. • it should include a works cited page to document all sources. • it should reflect mastery of the basic rules of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. • it should use formatting, multimedia, and graphics to reinforce and extend the content. • it should include three multimedia elements and should use at least two of the following types of multimedia: 1. photographs 2. video clips 3. audio clips 4. maps 5. charts 6. graphs 7. works of art (such as original songs, sculptures, painting, performances) • it should be presented in one of the following formats: 1. word document 2. powerpoint presentation 3. prezi presentation can i have points idk the answer

what are you asking?