You will revise your narrative, indicating four instances in which you have added adjectives and/or adverbs. You will also submit a reflection paragraph.

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Add adjectives and adverbs. Mark your new additions with an (Adj) or (Adv).
Make other revisions suggested in your Discussion-Based Assessment.
Write a reflection paragraph discussing changes you made during the revision process. Explain how you feel these changes improved your narrative.
Submit your (1) final draft and your (2) reflection paragraph.
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here was no artical inclued im sorry pleasse help ii got a 30% but she is letting mr retake if i dont get this right i have to redo my grade please answer ASAP

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

wrong! the answer is c.