Read the paragraph from a research-based essay on the benefits of a classroom with a learning center-based
layout for preschoolers.
What is the best way to revise the paragraph to connect
ideas?
(1) A classroom should be set up as a series of learning
centers, which are designated stations that encourage
exploration. (2) This layout allows children to move freely
throughout the room, delving into activities that interest
them and possibly discovering new materials and
games. (3) Self-directed play and learning promotes
confidence and independence in kids. (4) Students are
focused on a task of their choosing, enjoying
themselves, and interacting in smaller groups. (5)
Discipline problems are often reduced.
O by splitting sentence 1 into two sentences to separate
the ideas
O by splitting sentence 2 into two sentences to separate
the ideas
O by combining sentences 2 and 3 with the transition
word therefore
by combining sentences 4 and 5 with the transition
word so

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

- the mistakes that have been done in the past will repeat themselves

- you will trust all the wrong people

i would need the dialogue to answer this.