MARKING AS BARIBLIST PLEASE HELrevise the following essay so that it's more appropriate for the task, purpose, and audience described in the prompt. Prompt. write an argumentative essay aimed at your a state legislator that explains a few problems related to climate change and argues for reasonable change that ordinary people can make to help these problems
ESSAY. one way that we can help keep climate change from getting worse is by using public transportation rather than individual cars whenever possible. These changes in heat affect the entire Globes climate but not always in the same way. One outcome of climate change is extreme weather-not just extreme heat or drought, but also tornadoes, hurricanes, floods and other disasters that used to happen just once in a blue moon. Climate change is the result of carbon emissions in the atmosphere trapping heat that would normally leave through the ozone. Cars are responsible for 28% of carbon emissions in the United States if each person rode the bus just one day a week carbon emissions could be reduced by almost 40%

one way that we can help keep climate change from getting worse is by using public transportation rather than individual cars whenever possible. These changes in heat affect the entire Globes climate but not always in the same way. One outcome of climate change is extreme weather-not just extreme heat or drought, but also tornadoes, hurricanes, floods and other disasters that used to happen just once in a blue moon. Climate change is the result of carbon emissions in the atmosphere trapping heat that would normally leave through the ozone. Cars are responsible for 28% of carbon emissions in the United States if each person rode the bus just one day a week carbon emissions could be reduced by almost 40%

Explanation:

Explanation:

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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