Read the sentence that appears in an argumentative essay about American public education. Millions of dollars have been spent by taxpayers on programs to improve education. Which revision offers the most improvement in sentence fluency

what gradee ya in so we can do it im 8th grade

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roses are red,

violets are black,

for what you said,

i hope you sit on a big fat tack.

thousands of people

explanation:

bc

explanation:

because it crosses through the circle twice