Respond in 2 paragraphs: Think about your own writing process and write a brief response, comparing your process to both John McPhee's and Donald M. Murray's. How is it like or different from theirs? What tactics of theirs would you want to try?

the answer:

in the first part of the story running is all that matters to squeaky. running gives her confidence and defines who she is. at the beginning of the story she says that other kids call her mercury because she runs very fast. in the text she refers to herself as "miss quicksilver".

the line that provides the best evidence that squeaky has self-confidence is

" and i continue with my breathing exercise, strolling down broadway toward the ice cream man on 145th with not a care in the world cause i am miss quicksilver herself".

yes this is an analog in my view

the correct answer is:   [d]:   " diagram "   .

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