How can you use strategies such as adding and replacing to revise your draft for organization, cohesion, clarity, diction, and language?

Hey guys! for my reading class we have to write a review about a movie that we ourselves can pick. i picked the movie the boy with striped pajamas. so if you could let a couple bullet points below i am willing to give you 20 points more than 10 bullet points about the movie and inserting facts and whats its about. plz by this week