Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout. Passage
Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater, and
creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students provide feedback on
their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that peer review is a valuable
teaching tool that not only helps student artists reimagine their work but also pushes
student critics to develop their taste and technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong
with this is that sometimes people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be
nice. When that happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become
unproductive.

Hurry 20 mins left! study the timeline of russian history, and read the passage from chapter 1 of animal farm. "is it not crystal clear, then, comrades, that all the evils of this life of ours spring from the tyranny of human beings? only get rid of man, and the produce of our labour would be our own. almost overnight we could become rich and free. what then must we do? why, work night and day, body and soul, for the overthrow of the human race! that is my message to you, comrades: rebellion! " which event most likely influenced the writing of this passage? the 1905 massacre of people who were protesting their poor living conditions the 1917 bolshevik revolution, which was inspired by the ideals of lenin the development of the union of soviet socialist republics by lenin in 1922 the collectivization of agriculture by the communist party in russia in 1928