Guys please give me your opinion on my poem I had to write for class it is on paralysis If you ever had a stroke
Where your nerves just broke
You might know me
Though I wish I could flee
Maybe you have been numb
I am sorry that had to come
Have you felt weak?
Please do not freak
Is there stiffness in your muscles?
You can no longer hustle
Or maybe you have spasms
Do you feel you are at a chasm?
I am sorry it cannot be treated
I know it has made you heated
Therapy is recommended
Though it will not be splendid
It can keep it from worsening
But it will be burdening
It is not a cure
But you can never be so sure
Your muscle might be involuntary
When they used to be voluntary
Your sensory neurons must be shot
Or was there a clot?
Your motor neurons no longer work
Please do not think of me as a j3rk
I have not been the cause
I am just one of the flaws.

-hannah

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report