write a brief review of your presentation according to the comments that you received from your audience. Explain what they said you were doing well, and what you could improve upon.

its easy. You have to tell what good things the audience said about you and you want to review the comments from the audience and you then would have to put what you think you should improve on. It doesn't need to be a paragraph because remember, it said brief so you want to explain a lot but in a small amount. Catching my drift? or no?

Explanation:

It's pretty simple.

in paragraph 6 of "sinners in the hands of an angry god" by jonathan edwards, he talks about how doing good things alone will not save men from going to hell because they're at the mercy of the will of god. "spiritual reform" provides men with a false sense of safety.

"why don't you like me the way i am? " i cried. "i'm not a genius! i can't play the piano, and even if i could, i wouldn't go on tv if you paid me a million dollars! "

explanation:

the conflict between jing-mei and her mother is over jing-mei's piano lessons since her mother wants her to become a prodigy but she does not want to play it any more.