Read the email. To: m. blackfrankelem

Subject: have you graded my math test yet? please read, I want to know what grade I received, studied

From: saramymail

Dear Ms. Black,

I’m just checking to see if you’ve had a chance to grade my math test. I studied every day for two weeks and I am eager to find out the grade I received.

Sam

What part of the email needs revision?

the body
the subject line
the salutation
the signature

The Subject Line

Explanation:

The subject line needs revision because the subject should be a one line sentence, and should not include too much detail.

In the sentence ¨...math test yet? please read, I want to know¨ you need the P to be capitalized...¨ Other than that you NEED to edit you topic sentence, ¨have you graded my math test yet? please read, I want to know what grade I received, studied¨ to be shorter and Capitalize every letter in each word in your topic. So a good one for a topic sentence would be, ¨Grading Math Test¨

the service industry in the united states grew in the late 1800s. what was one effect of that growth?

the number of people with jobs in factories as unskilled workers decreased.

the number of people with jobs in factories as unskilled workers increased.

the middle class grew as people took jobs as clerks, lawyers, and teachers.

the middle class shrank as people left jobs as clerks, lawyers, and teachers.