Read the paragraph below. What is the author's position on walking? Explain your reasoning and include one claim found in the paragraph that supports the position. Walking is an easy, effective way to exercise. You get all the benefits of a fancy workout at a fancy gym just by strapping on your tennis shoes and going for a stroll through your neighborhood. Anyone new to exercise should give walking a try!

Hey TOG Anyways, here's what I got:

What I think:

I honestly don't know. But-

I believe that the author's position on walking is that it is healthy and good for working out. As the author says "You get all the benefits of a fancy workout at a fancy gym just by stapping on your tennis shoes and going for a stroll..." Saying, a walk is an easy and well-benefitted workout that everyone can do or try. In conclusion, the author's position on walking is that it's a great way to exercise.

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indeed, the register is quite formal and the tone is especially objective as it avoids the use of the first and second person singular (i, you) and opts instead for the third person plural which is more impersonal and focuses on the data and the argument that is being developed by the author. the formality adds the impression of respectability to the work and the impersonality adds objectivity to it.