Write an argument about whether or not technology and social media are obstacles to friendship. With 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion and good introduction:)

the turtle carries new life, oat seeds, over to the other side of the highway and plants them there.

the animal shelter ad with animals in cages, starving and dying.

explanation:

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

the difference of the poems of walt whitman and emily dickinson is that whitman uses personification, whereas dickinson avoids figurative language. whitman incorporates transcendentalism and realism in his works. on the other hand, dickinson's poems talks about death and immortality.