Read the free writing below then do the revision exercises the follow make notes on the story and or write in the space when you click question question. A noblman goes out hunting and catches a monste r who ha a big beard but it’s short the beard is a long as the moster in fact. He take sthe monster and puts it in the shed his son find it and let s it go The noble man tels his servant to kill the sun by the servant won’t the sun escapeds and goes to anotehr castle where the little monster makes all the daughters in love with him. he can’t figure out who to marry he marries the monster and they live happily ever after.

Identify places where the narrative is unclear or where the story could be more interesting or logical.

Find at least two places in the story where transition word or phrase would be helpful.

Correct the spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors in the story.