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A journalist gives you the following article. Edit it and write an e-mail to the journalist to explain the changes you made and offer some helpful tips for the future. Submit both your edited version of the article and the email that you'd send to the journalist. She may have live to be 100-years-old, but it was a fire, not age that took Hattie Stephen's life. The 100-year-old woman was killed when a fire ravaged her condominium on Saturday April 25th. The same fire destroyed two other condominium. Firefighters spent five hours battling the flames before they were finally contained.

The blaze started around 4 p. m. in the living room of Stephen's condominium in the 3000 block of North Elm Street. Authorities say an electrical spark may have caused an oxygen tank in the room to ignite. Confined to a wheelchair, it may have been difficult for Stephen to escape.

Family members remembered Hatty Stephen as a loving person who would give a listening ear to anyone who needed one. She was an also avid reader, reading the daily paper from cover to cover and going through 10 books a month from the local library.

"She was a wonderful woman," said Stephen's son, Richard Stephens. "She was blessed to live to 100, but we still think she was gone too soon."

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