Hi, I need help with this proofread paragraph. Thank you.

My brother takes his bike out. I need to fix my bike. The seat wobbles on bumpy roads. The pedals slip a lot, and the chain is loose. I tell my father about the problems. He offers to help and gets out his toolbox. Dad and I tighten many of the screws and bolts. I fill the tires with air, and Dad adjusts the chain. Now my brother and I enjoy riding to school together.

to avoid unnecessary repetition, not every chapter has a map exercise attached. write a one or two-sentence answer explaining the significance of the items 7, ¶ 3-4 - civilization began in the fertile crescent because villages needed careful “in an epic tale told not long after his reign, we find gilgamesh claiming

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explanation:

seeing as this is your first question on i can see why you may have not known that you need to provide the passage.

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