CRITICISM FOR ESSAY PLZ HELP 10 points and brainiest for anyone willing.
The intro and first body paragraph are included, and I'm still working on the remaining few. The prompt is: "In what ways can people be intelligent? Explain the impact of intelligence on child prodigies and their (The prodigies) impact on society.
Screenshot of the link because for some reason won't let me either paste or attach the whole thing.

The tankers are so large how did some crew members get from one point to another while on board

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.

Based on his npr interview,"astrophysicist chroniclesbattle over pluto," why does dr. tyson believe that pluto is america's favorite planet?