Write a review of the two performances of a scene from Shakespeare's The Tempest in this lesson. First identify Shakespeare's purpose as it relates to colonialism and imperialism. Then explain how well each performance achieves that purpose, supporting your opinion with evidence. Note that your objective in this assignment is to provide an evaluation, not just an analysis. You’re making a judgement about which of the two performances does a better job of conveying Shakespeare’s intent in The Tempest, based on factors like costumes, acting, casting, sets, and directing.

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faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

repetition is used to make the poem come off the page