Liza wrote in her journal, “pat and neil came to my party. Me and them are good friends.” Did Liza use pronouns correctly?

She didn't uppercase their names. Anytime you write somebodys name you have to make the first letter uppercase

i think its d, but grammarly says none

explanation:

but it is sometime nessary to hit key points or subjects   but is sometimes to much reveiw if there was a way to slim down the redone work it would improve for every body.