Read the first paragraph from Lupe’s first draft of an opinion piece about keeping elephants in zoos. Then, answer the question. It is very wrong to keep elephants in zoos. Living in a cage is not a natural life for an elephant it is wrong to keep them apart from their natural way of life. Elephants should be taken out of zoos and put in specul parks to live a happy life.

Lupe is still in the drafting stage of writing and shares this draft with a friend. Which is the most helpful comment her friend could share?
A. “Special” is misspelled.
B. The second sentence is a run-on sentence.
C. Explain more about what an elephant’s natural way of life is.
D. Explain whether or not you have ever seen an elephant in a zoo and how it made you feel.