NEED HELP Argument Writing: Removing Irrelevant Evidence argument below has one sentence that is not relevant to the claim. Cross out that sentence to strengthen the argument. Having a pet is a rewarding experience. For example, dogs oer companionship and opportunities for physical exercise. Hamsters' silly antics make people laugh, and watching fish or petting a cat can be relaxing. Some parrots can live for over 100 years. Caring for a pet teaches the value of responsibility. Furthermore, taking care of a pet enables the owner to experience love, loyalty, and aection. For all these reasons, taking care of a pet is truly a worthwhile adventure.

Some parrots can live for over 100 years is irrelevant.

Explanation:

the purpose of the heading in the passage is to identify who is telling the story.

this excerpt is part of the book sugar changed the world (2010) written by marc aronson and marina budhos. as the book has been written by two people, the heading "marc" indicates that this specific excerpt is being narrated by aronson. in the fragment, marc describes his grandfather's story after hearing it from his cousin. however, there are other excerpts where budhos is the one that tells the story of her family.

aronson and budhos, who are husband and wife in real life, decided to write sugar changed the world when they found out how sugar, which had an important role in slavery and economy, changed their ancestors' lives.

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.