Can someone please grammar check this Most kids are like Greg dreads being lectured by parents about grades. Mostly just wants to play and does not treasure bonds with parents until taught a hard way. This is how Greg is: he is not a bad kid, not even he is a good kid. But the thing is his mood most of the time and his priorities are messed up. Also, the way he gave up so quickly without trying to fix his mistakes.
Greg at the beginning of the short story “The Treasure of Lemon Brown” gave up so quickly without trying to fix his mistakes. During the story, his principal sent a letter saying that he would fail math if he did not study hard enough. As soon as he got that he knew he would not be able to play ball. Giving up before his parents said and even after he did not get motivated to study and try at least to pass. In the end, he seemed to change the way, and believe if he tried hard enough, he most likely got this motivation from the encounter of the thugs.
Greg at the beginning of the short story “The Treasure of Lemon Brown” his priorities are messed up not messed up more like they are not in the right order. He is a kid this is understandable. During the start, he was more focused on being able to play basketball than trying to improve his math grade and try to pass math. But luckily for him, his priorities got in order after his experience with lemon brown. He understood what he must focus on then spare time-work on being better at basketball.
Greg's mood is bad at the beginning of the short story “The Treasure of Lemon Brown.” Moods are very easily swung to another mood when something happens, and this was the same for Greg. In the story, Greg was very upset about not being able to play basketball due to his grades in mathematics. Later, after Lemon brown shared his story. Greg had a happier and more curious mood and when he came home, he was even happy to get a talk from his father
Greg truly changed during this story. From beginning to end he went from being like what most kids are and his problems his mood most of the time and his priorities. Also, the way he gave up so quickly without trying to fix his mistakes. Expect the last one there were no indications that he had changed from giving up so quickly. All took was to talk to the man that had many stories to inspire change.