i need to make a thesis for an argumentative essay, my prompt is Why I think parents should encourage their child or children to be creative through their childhood and throughout their school years untill they leave for college. I need to fix my claim, the claim i written down is, I believe this because when a child's parent encourages them to be mpre creative, it can lead them on a path that can help further develop technology like computers or even medicine. They could help develop society socially like making a new theme of music or art, making a new musical instrument. Parents encouraging their child or children can help get them good jobs or jobs that can lead them to fame. This could be achieved if parents encourage their children to be more creative. I have to get this approved by my teacher and she said, That will not work as a thesis, so you need to change it. It is not an arguable claim." i need this done asap because this is already late and I cant start on the research assignment till i get this approved​

How can the rebuttal best address the counterclaim? read the claim and reason beginning in high school students should eam their own money by finding aher school employment. an aber school job seves not only as income, but as valuable experience for when students leave school for the workiorce. read the counterclaim and reason while having a source of income can certainly be a learning experience for high school students, they should maintain their focus on academics and extracurricular activities working atter school many experts agree, can lead to a decrease in school success which can then limit students' options when they enter the workforce the rebuttal should include examples of jobs that are available to students and the problems associated with those jobs the rebuttal should acknowledge that school remains a priority and discuss the benefits of a balance between school and work the rebuttal should address the need for a discussion on the matter by restating both points before reaching a conclusion the rebuttal should state a logical explanation for both opinions before granting credibility to the need for school to remain a priority

Read the passage. (1) since prehistoric times, milk has been a vital source of nutrition for human beings. (2) some doctors and nutritionists believe that consuming milk can be detrimental to our health. (3) milk is one of the most nutrient-dense beverages we can consume and it should be an essential part of a healthy diet. (4) drinking just one 8-ounce glass of milk per day puts you well on your way to meeting recommended daily intakes for important nutrients. which transition would be best to use at the beginning of sentence 2? finally additionally however specifically

Where do i find advocacy articles for 2.04 english 4? this is for the first amendment.