What is wrong with this dialogue? "I'm tired," said Max. "So am I," said Juan.

Ok so here is the best answer i could come up with.

The grammar is correct as far as i know so the only thing that i can come up with is that is it bland, and boring. It is lacking . . . spice if you know what i mean. If it asks you to correct it i would say the following

"I'm tired," said Max.

"So am I," agreed Juan.

Or something like that. Now that i am looking at it it might be that the word "said" is repeated, which adds to the lack of spice to it.

Anyway i really hope that helped and i am so sorry if i made you more confused! I hope you have a good day! Be tiger fierce! :)

michael’s company should invest in the updating of every section as well as data and processes technology and software. through the analysis of the manufacturing process, the company can take a clear approach towards the best way to improve not only the process but also de final result. some of the main problems that manufacturing companies face are the waste of material due to disorganized processes and the lack of real-time process checkings. this can be solved with specific software and machines that can turn paperwork into the digital era and that will reduce the time employees take on that, being this time better apply to control the production process and communication among different sectors of the company, the product will be made in shorter time with better quality and more profit

the answer is:

in the fourth paragraph. ( the paragraph that begins with “on friday of my third ”).

hope it !