Comparison paragraph: Now write a comparison paragraph explaining how the two shows are similar. You topic sentence needs to state the two titles of the t. v. shows (underline titles) and needs to state that they are similar. Your paragraph needs to continue by stating three of the strongest qualities in common. After each quality, explain how it is in each show. Sentence 1 Topic sentence:.

Sentence 2 Quality #1:.

Sentence 3 How quality is in the first show and then second :.

Sentence 4 Quality #2 :.

Sentence 5 How quality is in the first show and then second :.

Sentence 6 Quality #3 :.

Sentence 7 How quality is in the first show and then second :.

Sentence 8 Coclusion (Why do you think the two show are so similar? Or why is it a good thing or wrong that the show are so similar?)​

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the answer would be c

you should start by saying what they did to these subjects hope that this