Okie so I wrote this its a little long but it would mean a lot if you gave out pointers.
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There are some spelling mistakes, continuity issues, and punctuation mistakes, but WOW!  This is so good!  I couldn't stop reading.

Explanation:

i believe it would be the first one the importance of internet safety

explanation:

because now and days kids don't know what the can find on the internet they can find dark web, 4 chan ect. if we don't teach them internet safety anything can happen.

(don't search up,dark web,4 chan u have been warned)

industrialization in great britain began with the global 'industrial revolution', a pioneer. industrialization in russia was the last in europe, a laggard.

great britain’s industrialization was driven by individual citizens, while russia’s was guided by the government.