Hi I'm writing a book and I would like your opinion on it. The first chapter is up on Reddit and I'm continuing it there too. Leave a comment to let me know what you think of it. My username is "u/TAwrites10"

Read the paragraph. we heard music coming from the auditorium so we crept up to the door in peaked in. i couldn’t believe my eyes! a group of dancers were on stage in the most beautiful costumes i have ever seen. i looked at mabel and she looked back at me with the same expression. our eyes were wide with joy and wonder. which point of view does the narrator use

How did rick respond to this conflict

The bonus army constructed from any materials they could find.