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Police body cameras showed former officers Garrett Rofle and Devan Brosnan speaking with brookes for more than 40 minutes after complaints that 27-year-old Black man had fallen asleep in his car.

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Police body cameras showed former officers Garrett Rofle and Devan Brosnan speaking with Brookes for more than 40 minutes after complaints that 27-year-old Black man had fallen asleep in his car.

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it is b

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you need infomation to write a essay

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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