WHAT DO Y'ALL THANK OF MY POEM? (for my literature class)

LOVE
Love, What is love?
Is love a seed that grows and grows until it's a big beautiful flower, or is love the commitment from a soldier to the American flag, or is love the moon and the sun taking turns Shining Light down on us, or is love the gateway to Hell that always stays open?

Love, What is love?
Love is something that we live, see, and breathe every day, we can't hide it, we can't control it. Love always finds you stuck in a cradle wishing you could just find one piece of love to cheer your broken heart. Love is like a little bright star that peeks through the Cloudy dark sky wishing that it was just as big as the other stars, because that star has been broken too many times that it will never be as big as the others. Love, how is love so blind it bypasses all the bad just for the good in people.
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