Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows: Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? (10 points)

a
A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
b
A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
c
Redundant phrases were eliminated.
d
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

D

Explanation:

They replaced disliked with hated, so they replaced it with a synonym.

D. Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Explanation:

Disliked was used twice, but was replaced the second time with a synonym.

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use of language is very important in order to write in a good way. each literary genre has its different exploitation of language and, therefore, many differences and similarities can emerge. shakespeare's work (romeo and juliet) is a sample of a drama. its language is full of dialogue to describe the beauty of first love in people; everything it's pink color. it briefly describes fictional scenes and situations. on the other hand, the calypso borealis, by john muirs, it's narrative essay: its language is full of descriptions to describe an experience, a real experience. hyperbole is not used as in drama genre. he falls in love with discovering a real place and his direct feelings.

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