100 POINTS! Part D
Do you find the characters and events in the story to be believable and relatable?

Read the passage from Under the Mesquite once more and take notes about the main character, Lupita, who is the narrator in this passage. As you take notes, you may want to use this graphic organizer to identify Lupita’s feelings, attributes, sayings, and thoughts in the text.

As you summarize your findings in the table, use detailed examples from the text.

In the preview of the text I noticed that señorita in the passage is different meanings to different people. In señorita they put the squiggly line on top to show change of pronunciation. The other thing I noticed was each verse is the saying of señorita of different people.

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

the use supports it by making it seem like the dictators are not bad to the people when the truly are.