Write a formal persuasive e-mail to a community leader to address a social concern.

Dear Chief,

   I am writing this email with a heaviness of heart concerning the constant flooding of our community during raining season. This is a very pertinent issue that requires prompt action, Sir. As a youth leader in this community, I am aware that several people have been rendered homeless and even lost their beloved to this flooding.

  I am appealing to you as the key leader in this community that drastic measures should be taken to put a stop to this yearly flooding. The youths have promised to assist the community in their full capacity if the community is willing to take the required measures. This is to ensure that laughter is put to the faces of every inhabitant of this community. I will be glad to hear from you on the readiness of the community to begin this work, Sir. Thanks in anticipation.

                Sincerely,

                Kolade Oyesetan,

                Youth Leader.

the answer is b, it brings the reader closer to the action.

it would've been a if the word had been determined, not conceited

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you should ask "yourself is it good enough? "