CREATIVE WRITING-100 POINTS-PLZ HELP 1. In the unit, we learned that characterization is a key process when developing layers and
depth for your character and for your piece of writing. Appearance is one way in which we
define characters, but it is important not to make one-dimensional or generic characters. In
three to five sentences, please re-write and expand on the following sentences characterizing
a 30-year old woman. Attempt to be less generic and more engaging.
"Sarah, only 30 years old, had worked as a cashier at the grocery store most of her life. Her
hair was plain brown and she never smiled. She seemed unhappy"

Sarah is a thirty year old woman who works at her local grocery store. She had worked there just about her entire life. She has brown hair and doesn't smile very often. She seems to be unhappy.

Explanation:

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the price of our current war is high; it costs money and it costs lives.

but it does not cost our pride. it does not cost the guilt that would arise from knowing that we did nothing to intervene while our neighboring nations fell to despotic leaders.

it does not cost the terror of knowing that our allies are unstable. it does not cost the fear that we, too, will be next to fall.

which sentence most accurately explains why the speaker's use of the parallel structure is effective in this passage?

a. it underscores that disagreement will not be tolerated and will be dealt with swiftly.

b. it makes the speaker seem like a decisive and capable leader.

c. it emphasizes reasons to fight and inspires listeners to aid the war effort.

d. it establishes the speaker's credibility by acknowledging the difficulties of war.