Someone help me I wrote a poem and can someone tell me something I should add or edit I recall a moment when I was once scared of the ocean at night
Frightened of what may be there since there was no sight
I seemed to ask myself why am I afraid? The water was not deep
What am I afraid of ? I took a few steps in and stopped I couldn’t keep going
I felt the shells and with the fear of sea creatures so I got out right away
I was too scared that I was thinking in my head “maybe tomorrow but not today”
Feared the water
Feared the darkness
Feared the creatures
Feared dying
Someone once said “If you don't do wild things while you're young, You'll have nothing to smile about when you're old” and I took that risk and don’t regret it

In shakespeare’s hamlet what word can be substituted for allusion in the phrase the illusion is that not only does larry us die as expected but hamlet is doomed to die by the poison on his own sword as

However, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. what would be the best way to revise this sentence for greater clarity? a) however, the fact that columbus left spain thousands of years after people settled what would become the united states never dawned on me. b) it never dawned on me, however, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain. c) however, the fact that people were already living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. d) however, the idea never dawned on me that long before columbus ever left spain, real-life people lived for thousands of years in what would become the united states.

How dose religion today compared to the puritans idea of religion