FLVS Flex English 3 (3.07 Revising the Narrative Essay) Let me know how to fix these body paragraphs. Please & Thank You.

During my whole childhood I had only one true friend name Fortunato. Everyone ended up starting to like him thus I became very jealous of his popularity. That was how my childhood went from being bullied to having an abusive father to being jealous of my friend. Years later I saw and meet up with Fortunato during the carnival season. I told him that he has acquired something that could pass for Amontillado, a light Spanish sherry. Fortunato is apprehensive about drinking the wine and to determine for Montresor whether or not it is truly Amontillado. Fortunato insist we go to my vaults. When we go down to the vaults it is covered in nitre minerals, which made Fortunato cough. In the deep vaults rest Montresor family with the motto “nemo me impune lacessit,” that is, “no one attacks me with impunity.” In English. Later in the journey Fortunato makes hand movements that is the sign of the Masons. Montresor does not recognize the hand movements, even though he says he is a Mason himself.
Montresor tells Fortunato that he can leave by taunting him. He begins to wall up the entrance to this small crypt, there for trapping Fortunato inside. Fortunato screams confusedly as Montresor continues to build the first layer of many. As Montresor builds the alcohol wears off Fortunato, which makes him terrified and helpless. As the layers start to pile Fortunato becomes silent, like he gave up on screaming for help or to do anything. Montresor fits the very last stone into place and plastering the walls closed. Then he placed the bones on the fourth wall. Finally, he writes, may he rest in peace.