Can someone help a guy out? I need to get this done and I need someone to go 1-3 and fix the grammar issues and rewrite the sentences correctly. I’ll give brainalist + points (I’ll pay you if necessary)

1. She swam the English Channel several times in the past year, and felt extremely accomplished afterwards.

2. My brother and I need to buy shirts, pants, socks, and shoes for school. So we really hope our parents have enough money.

3. The dogs' tails wagged as father gave them John's leftovers. John looked at them in anger.

Explanation:

The question we are answering here demands a thorough knowledge of English since it includes several different types of grammatical mistakes. Let's explain them:

1. Proper nouns, such as names of rivers, oceans, countries, and people, should be capitalized: "John", "English Channel".

2. We should use commas to separate the items in a list: "shirts, pants, socks, and shoes."

3. Irregular verbs have their own past form: swim - swam ("swimmed" does not exist)

4. We should try to maintain the same verb tense when the passage talks of actions that happened in the same period of time: need / hope; wagged / looked

5. Some words sound the same but are spelled differently. That is the case with "passed", which is a verb, and "past" which can be a noun or an adjective.  That is also the case with "bye" and "buy". We must select the correct one to convey the proper meaning.

6. "Enuf" is a spelling that may be used in very informal conversation - texting with friends, for example. The correct spelling is "enough".

7. In number 2, there is a question mark where there is no question. It should be dropped and replaced with a period.

either a donut or a sphere or a pancake or a flat sphere. it depends on where the vertical line is.

if the line goes through the center of the circle and is perpendicular to a diameter containing the center, then you get a flat circle.

if the line and the diameter of a the circle meet in the center of the diameter and at an angle, you get a pancake.

if the line is on the circumference of the circle and is at right angles   to the circle you get a ring.

if the line contains the diameter, you get a sphere.

the the line is parallel to the diameter and touches the circumference, you get a donut.